Use shorter sentences to describe sending state

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Chris Hill-Scott
2016-07-11 13:40:27 +01:00
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@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ Delivery and failure GOV.UK Notify
<h2 id="sending" class="heading-medium">Sending</h2>
<p>All new messages start with the state Sending.</p>
<p>All messages start in the Sending state.</p>
<p>This means that we have accepted the message, the message is waiting in a queue to be sent to our email or text message delivery partners.</p>
<p>This means that we have accepted the message. Its waiting in a queue to be sent to our email or text message delivery partners.</p>
<h2 id="delivered" class="heading-medium">Delivered</h2>