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On the page where signed in users can download the agreement:

> The second sentence of that could probably just be 'You can [download
> a copy]'. And could go at the end of the previous paragraph. (We try
> to avoid 'here', and the 'if you need to' is probably unnecessary).

On the page where we give users a choice of agreement to sign:

> We could probably edit that callout down a bit to: '[Contact us] if
> you're not sure whether your organisation is a crown or non-crown
> body.'
>
> (Try to keep callouts to a single sentence if we can)
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</p> </p>
<div class="panel panel-border-wide"> <div class="panel panel-border-wide">
<p> <p>
Unsure whether your organisation is a crown body? Contact <a href="{{ url_for('main.support') }}">Contact us</a> if you’re
<a href="{{ url_for('main.support') }}">support</a> not sure whether your organisation is a crown or non-crown body.
and we’ll help you work it out.
</p> </p>
</div> </div>
<h2 class="heading-small"> <h2 class="heading-small">

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<p> <p>
Your organisation ({{ owner }}) has already accepted the GOV.UK Your organisation ({{ owner }}) has already accepted the GOV.UK
Notify data sharing and financial agreement. Notify data sharing and financial agreement. You can
</p> <a href="{{ url_for('main.download_agreement') }}">download a copy</a>.
<p>
If you need to you can <a href="{{ url_for('main.download_agreement') }}">download a copy here</a>.
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
The agreement contains commercially sensitive information, so don’t share it more widely than you need to. The agreement contains commercially sensitive information, so don’t share it more widely than you need to.