From 661a1ca47ff2cbb6433a1d365836cb7d7ee7f8bc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chris Hill-Scott <me@quis.cc>
Date: Wed, 9 May 2018 16:02:02 +0100
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On the page where signed in users can download the agreement:

> The second sentence of that could probably just be 'You can [download
> a copy]'. And could go at the end of the previous paragraph. (We try
> to avoid 'here', and the 'if you need to' is probably unnecessary).

On the page where we give users a choice of agreement to sign:

> We could probably edit that callout down a bit to: '[Contact us] if
> you're not sure whether your organisation is a crown or non-crown
> body.'
>
> (Try to keep callouts to a single sentence if we can)
---
 app/templates/views/agreement-choose.html | 5 ++---
 app/templates/views/agreement-signed.html | 6 ++----
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/templates/views/agreement-choose.html b/app/templates/views/agreement-choose.html
index 6be24d1a1..8ab9d1926 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/agreement-choose.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/agreement-choose.html
@@ -34,9 +34,8 @@
     </p>
     <div class="panel panel-border-wide">
       <p>
-        Unsure whether your organisation is a crown body? Contact
-        <a href="{{ url_for('main.support') }}">support</a>
-        and we’ll help you work it out.
+        <a href="{{ url_for('main.support') }}">Contact us</a> if you’re
+        not sure whether your organisation is a crown or non-crown body.
       </p>
     </div>
     <h2 class="heading-small">
diff --git a/app/templates/views/agreement-signed.html b/app/templates/views/agreement-signed.html
index 212360855..1f0f9396e 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/agreement-signed.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/agreement-signed.html
@@ -19,10 +19,8 @@
 
     <p>
       Your organisation ({{ owner }}) has already accepted the GOV.UK
-      Notify data sharing and financial agreement.
-    </p>
-    <p>
-      If you need to you can <a href="{{ url_for('main.download_agreement') }}">download a copy here</a>.
+      Notify data sharing and financial agreement. You can
+      <a href="{{ url_for('main.download_agreement') }}">download a copy</a>.
     </p>
     <p>
       The agreement contains commercially sensitive information, so don’t share it more widely than you need to.