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Update content based on Thom’s feedback
On the page where signed in users can download the agreement: > The second sentence of that could probably just be 'You can [download > a copy]'. And could go at the end of the previous paragraph. (We try > to avoid 'here', and the 'if you need to' is probably unnecessary). On the page where we give users a choice of agreement to sign: > We could probably edit that callout down a bit to: '[Contact us] if > you're not sure whether your organisation is a crown or non-crown > body.' > > (Try to keep callouts to a single sentence if we can)
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</p>
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<div class="panel panel-border-wide">
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<p>
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Unsure whether your organisation is a crown body? Contact
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<a href="{{ url_for('main.support') }}">support</a>
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and we’ll help you work it out.
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<a href="{{ url_for('main.support') }}">Contact us</a> if you’re
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not sure whether your organisation is a crown or non-crown body.
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</p>
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</div>
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<h2 class="heading-small">
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<p>
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Your organisation ({{ owner }}) has already accepted the GOV.UK
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Notify data sharing and financial agreement.
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<p>
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If you need to you can <a href="{{ url_for('main.download_agreement') }}">download a copy here</a>.
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Notify data sharing and financial agreement. You can
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<a href="{{ url_for('main.download_agreement') }}">download a copy</a>.
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</p>
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<p>
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The agreement contains commercially sensitive information, so don’t share it more widely than you need to.
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