Update content based on Thom’s feedback

On the page where signed in users can download the agreement:

> The second sentence of that could probably just be 'You can [download
> a copy]'. And could go at the end of the previous paragraph. (We try
> to avoid 'here', and the 'if you need to' is probably unnecessary).

On the page where we give users a choice of agreement to sign:

> We could probably edit that callout down a bit to: '[Contact us] if
> you're not sure whether your organisation is a crown or non-crown
> body.'
>
> (Try to keep callouts to a single sentence if we can)
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Chris Hill-Scott
2018-05-09 16:02:02 +01:00
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</p>
<div class="panel panel-border-wide">
<p>
Unsure whether your organisation is a crown body? Contact
<a href="{{ url_for('main.support') }}">support</a>
and well help you work it out.
<a href="{{ url_for('main.support') }}">Contact us</a> if youre
not sure whether your organisation is a crown or non-crown body.
</p>
</div>
<h2 class="heading-small">

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<p>
Your organisation ({{ owner }}) has already accepted the GOV.UK
Notify data sharing and financial agreement.
</p>
<p>
If you need to you can <a href="{{ url_for('main.download_agreement') }}">download a copy here</a>.
Notify data sharing and financial agreement. You can
<a href="{{ url_for('main.download_agreement') }}">download a copy</a>.
</p>
<p>
The agreement contains commercially sensitive information, so dont share it more widely than you need to.