diff --git a/app/templates/views/signedout.html b/app/templates/views/signedout.html
index f672bf626..8c703d847 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/signedout.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/signedout.html
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Notify.gov
     <div class="grid-row grid-gap display-flex flex-align-center">
       <div class="desktop:grid-col-7 tablet:grid-col-12">
         <h1 class="font-serif-2xl usa-hero__heading">Reach people where they are with government-powered text messages</h1>
-        <p class="font-sans-lg">Notify.gov is a text message service that helps federal, state, local, tribal and territorial governments more effectively communicate with the people who use their services.</p>
+        <p class="font-sans-lg">Notify.gov is a text message service that helps federal, state, local, tribal and territorial governments more effectively communicate with the people they serve.</p>
         <div class="usa-button-group margin-bottom-5">
           <a class="usa-button usa-button--big margin-right-2" href="{{ url_for('main.sign_in' )}}">Sign in</a>
           if you are an existing pilot partner