From d7fe5eb3bb5791a92d8e87c4f8b30c711a3890c0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: karlchillmaid <karl.chillmaid@digital.cabinet-office.gov.uk>
Date: Fri, 5 Apr 2019 15:33:25 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Update introduction

Update introduction
---
 app/templates/views/message-status.html | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/templates/views/message-status.html b/app/templates/views/message-status.html
index 283bc767e..c67fedc8b 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/message-status.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/message-status.html
@@ -13,11 +13,11 @@
   </div>
   <div class="column-two-thirds">
 
-    <h1 class="heading-large">What happens when you send a message // Message states you’ll see in Notify</h1>
+    <h1 class="heading-large">What happens when you send a message</h1>
 
     <p>When you send a message using GOV.UK Notify, it moves through different states.</p>
-    <p>Notify’s real-time dashboard lets you check the status of any message, to see when it was delivered. You can use our API to check the status of your messages too.</p>
-    <p>For security, this information is only available for X days after a message has been sent. You can download a list of sent messages for your own records.</p>
+    <p>Notify’s real-time dashboard lets you check the status of any message, to see when it was delivered. You can also use our API to check the status of your messages.</p>
+    <p>For security, this information is only available for 7 days after a message has been sent. You can download a report, including a list of sent messages, for your own records.</p>
 
     <img
         src="{{ asset_url('images/message-sending-flow.svg') }}"
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
              temporary failures"
         style="width: 100%;"
     >
-    <h2 id="messagestatus" class="heading-medium">Message states you’ll see in Notify</h2>
+    <h2 id="messagestatus" class="heading-medium">Message statuses you’ll see in Notify</h2>
     
     <h3 class="heading-small">Emails and text messages</h3>
     <div class="bottom-gutter-3-2">