From c111a68b5764c5903612fc7b14814767c612c062 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: karlchillmaid <karl.chillmaid@digital.cabinet-office.gov.uk>
Date: Wed, 11 Aug 2021 15:41:39 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Update content

---
 app/templates/views/accessibility_statement.html | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/templates/views/accessibility_statement.html b/app/templates/views/accessibility_statement.html
index 7ffca39b0..0d54e60b7 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/accessibility_statement.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/accessibility_statement.html
@@ -117,26 +117,26 @@
   <h3 class="heading-small">Problems with using the interface</h3>
 
   <p class="govuk-body">
-    The following problems have been identified with the user interface:
+    We’ve identified the following problems with the user interface:
   </p>
 
-  <ul class="govuk-list govuk-list--bullet">
+  <ol class="govuk-list govuk-list--number">
     <li>
-      The heading on pages for folders is announced as multiple sentences if it has parent folders when using the JAWS screen reader. We plan to fix this by [TODO date].
+      The JAWS screen reader announces template folder page headings as multiple sentences. We plan to fix this by [TODO date].
     </li>
     <li>
-      The validation we use to help users recover from errors has problems which make it hard to know when errors occur and to understand them. We plan to fix this by [TODO date].
+      Our validation errors cause problems for screen readers. This means it can be hard to know when an error has occurred or what to do next. We plan to fix this by [TODO date].
     </li>
     <li>
       The way we label the different regions of our pages is confusing for screen reader users. We plan to fix this by [TODO date].
     </li>
     <li>
-      The component used to select a time and date to send your messages has several problems which make it confusing to use with a screen reader. We plan to fix this by [TODO date].
+      Choosing the date and time you want to send a message using a screen reader can be confusing. We plan to fix this by [TODO date].
     </li>
     <li>
-      The version of our checkboxes that can expand and collapse has several problems which make it confusint o use with a screen reader.
+      Expanding and collapsing groups of checkboxes using a screen reader can be confusing. We plan to fix this by [TODO date].
     </li>
-  </ul>
+  </ol>
 
   <h3 class="heading-small">
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