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From: Chris Hill-Scott <me@quis.cc>
Date: Fri, 11 Mar 2016 07:38:35 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Reword the help text about adding placeholders
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In research we’ve seen users struggle with this. Often they’d type
((Joe Bloggs)) or ((XX/XX/XXXX)) instead of a sensible name.

Lets see if explaining it differently helps.
---
 app/assets/stylesheets/views/edit-template.scss | 2 +-
 app/templates/views/edit-email-template.html    | 8 ++++++--
 app/templates/views/edit-sms-template.html      | 8 ++++++--
 3 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/assets/stylesheets/views/edit-template.scss b/app/assets/stylesheets/views/edit-template.scss
index 3635b067f..dd1c8e789 100644
--- a/app/assets/stylesheets/views/edit-template.scss
+++ b/app/assets/stylesheets/views/edit-template.scss
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
   &-placeholder-hint {
     display: block;
     padding-top: 20px;
-    color: $secondary-text-colour;
+    //color: $secondary-text-colour;
   }
 
 }
diff --git a/app/templates/views/edit-email-template.html b/app/templates/views/edit-email-template.html
index fa16b07c9..2a41722e3 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/edit-email-template.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/edit-email-template.html
@@ -21,8 +21,12 @@
         </div>
         <div class="column-one-third">
           <label for='template_content' class='edit-template-placeholder-hint'>
-            Add placeholders using double brackets, eg Your thing
-            is due on ((date))
+            <p>
+              Add personalisation with double brackets, eg Dear ((name))
+            </p>
+            <p>
+              You’ll fill in the real data when you send a message.
+            </p>
           </label>
         </div>
       </div>
diff --git a/app/templates/views/edit-sms-template.html b/app/templates/views/edit-sms-template.html
index 5f57dd61f..f4a395928 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/edit-sms-template.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/edit-sms-template.html
@@ -20,8 +20,12 @@
         </div>
         <div class="column-one-third">
           <label for='template_content' class='edit-template-placeholder-hint'>
-            Add placeholders using double brackets, eg Your thing
-            is due on ((date))
+            <p>
+              Add personalisation with double brackets, eg Dear ((name))
+            </p>
+            <p>
+              You'll have to add the real data when you send a message.
+            </p>
           </label>
         </div>
       </div>