From af017817b08c7b19252bfaaf0e73847a44bbdcd4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chris Hill-Scott <me@quis.cc>
Date: Sat, 23 Apr 2016 16:37:20 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Remove some words from the home page

So that the proposition is clearer.
---
 app/templates/views/signedout.html | 10 +++-------
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/templates/views/signedout.html b/app/templates/views/signedout.html
index d4ab329d9..1fb622e85 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/signedout.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/signedout.html
@@ -9,21 +9,17 @@
 <div class="grid-row">
   <div class="column-two-thirds">
     <h1 class="heading-xlarge">GOV.UK Notify</h1>
-
     <p>
-      Use GOV.UK Notify to send notifications by text message, email and letter.
+      Making it easy to send text messages, emails, and letters to your users.
     </p>
     <p>
-      We're making it easy to keep your users informed.
-    </p>
-    <p>
-      If you work for a UK government department or agency you can set up a test account now.
+      If you work for a UK government department or agency you can try it now.
     </p>
     <p>
       <a class="button" href="{{ url_for('.register' )}}" role="button">Set up an account</a>
     </p>
     <p>
-      If you've used GOV.UK Notify before, <a href="{{ url_for('.sign_in' )}}">sign in to your account</a>.
+      If you’ve used GOV.UK Notify before, <a href="{{ url_for('.sign_in' )}}">sign in to your account</a>.
     </p>
 
   </div>