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From: Chris Hill-Scott <me@quis.cc>
Date: Mon, 16 Jul 2018 17:00:02 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Revise how we talk about what basic view is
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The page where you switch on the feature
---

This content aims to describe:
- the benefit of basic view – ‘make Notify quicker and simpler’
- who it benefits – ‘team members who only need to send messages’
- how it does it – ‘by hiding…’
- what it prevents users from being able to do or see –  ‘everything
  except…’
- what it allows users to do – ‘send messages’, [see] ‘templates, a list
  of sent messages’

I’m still keen to mention sent messages here, as it feels weird not to
mention it at all when it’s 1 of only 2 options in Basic view. I don’t
think it’s as important to mention it on the Edit team member screen.

I’ve specifically used ‘a list of sent messages’ rather than just ‘sent
messages’, to make it seem less like a noun (new feature).

The page where you choose whether someone has basic view
---

Switches the focus from what you can see to what you can’t.

Aims to be consistent with both:
- the description of permissions in admin view
- the language used to describe basic view in settings
---
 app/templates/views/manage-users/permissions.html    |  4 ++--
 .../views/service-settings/set-basic-view.html       | 12 ++++++++----
 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/templates/views/manage-users/permissions.html b/app/templates/views/manage-users/permissions.html
index f6da0ded0..8af5f6ec2 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/manage-users/permissions.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/manage-users/permissions.html
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
 
         <div class="bottom-gutter-1-3">
           {{ radio(option, option_hints={
-              'admin': 'See dashboard and team members',
-              'caseworker': 'Send messages and see sent messages'
+              'admin': 'Show dashboard, templates and team members',
+              'caseworker': 'Send messages from existing templates, hide other options'
           }) }}
         </div>
         {% if option.data == 'admin' %}
diff --git a/app/templates/views/service-settings/set-basic-view.html b/app/templates/views/service-settings/set-basic-view.html
index 535d9b70c..d68a6a3ed 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/service-settings/set-basic-view.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/service-settings/set-basic-view.html
@@ -12,14 +12,18 @@
     <form method="post" class="column-five-sixths">
       <h1 class="heading-large">Basic view</h1>
       <p>
-        Basic view lets you restrict a team member to only:
+        Make Notify quicker and simpler to use for team members who only
+        need to send messages.
+      </p>
+      <p>
+        Basic view hides everything except:
       </p>
       <ul class="list list-bullet">
-        <li>send messages</li>
-        <li>see sent messages</li>
+        <li>templates</li>
+        <li>a list of sent messages</li>
       </ul>
       <p>
-        You’ll get to choose which team members have basic view.
+        You can choose which team members have basic view.
       </p>
       <p>
         <a href="{{ url_for('main.preview_basic_view', service_id=current_service.id) }}">See a preview of basic view</a>.