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From: Chris Hill-Scott <me@quis.cc>
Date: Mon, 11 Jul 2016 13:41:43 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Rename failure status on delivery page
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…so that they agree with what we show in the interface/CSV, eg ‘phone
does not exist’ instead of ‘permanent failure’.
---
 app/templates/views/delivery-and-failure.html | 21 +++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/templates/views/delivery-and-failure.html b/app/templates/views/delivery-and-failure.html
index a5050a7e3..22221bcb0 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/delivery-and-failure.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/delivery-and-failure.html
@@ -16,8 +16,9 @@ Delivery and failure – GOV.UK Notify
     <ul class="list list-bullet">
       <li><a href="#sending">Sending</a></li>
       <li><a href="#delivered">Delivered</a></li>
-      <li><a href="#permanent-failure">Permanently failed</a></li>
-      <li><a href="#temporary-failure">Temporarily failed</a></li>
+      <li><a href="#does-not-exist">Phone number or email address does not exist</a></li>
+      <li><a href="#inbox-not-accepting-messages">Inbox not accepting messages right now</a></li>
+      <li><a href="#phone-not-accepting-messages">Phone not accepting messages right now</a></li>
       <li><a href="#technical-failure">Technical failure</a></li>
     </ul>
 
@@ -35,19 +36,21 @@ Delivery and failure – GOV.UK Notify
 
     <p>We can’t tell you if they’ve read it – to do so would require invasive and unreliable tracking techniques.</p>
 
-    <h2 id="permanent-failure" class="heading-medium">Permanently failed</h2>
+    <h2 id="does-not-exist" class="heading-medium">Phone number or email address does not exist</h2>
 
-    <p>This means the email address or mobile number doesn’t exist or is blacklisted – also known as a ‘hard bounce’.</p>
+    <p>You’re still billed for text messages to non-existant phone numbers.</p>
 
-    <p>You’re still billed for these text messages.</p>
+    <p><strong>You need to remove the email address or mobile number from your database.</strong></p>
 
-    <p><strong>You need to remove this email address or mobile number from your database.</strong></p>
+    <h2 id="inbox-not-accepting-messages" class="heading-medium">Inbox not accepting messages right now</h2>
 
-    <h2 id="temporary-failure" class="heading-medium">Temporarily failed</h2>
+    <p>This can happen for a number of reasons, eg the user’s inbox was full.</p>
 
-    <p>This means the email address or mobile number was full, or the mobile phone was switched off – also known as a ‘soft bounce’.</p>
+    <p><strong>You can choose to retry this message later or not.</strong></p>
 
-    <p>We mark messages as ‘Temporarily failed’.</p>
+    <h2 id="phone-not-accepting-messages" class="heading-medium">Phone not accepting messages right now</h2>
+
+    <p>This means the user’s phone was full or hasn’t been switched on in the last 72 hours.</p>
 
     <p>You’re still billed for these messages.</p>