From 78f44e2433fa0bbea645820c7acbc2a6d1893603 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: karlchillmaid <karl.chillmaid@digital.cabinet-office.gov.uk>
Date: Tue, 15 Oct 2019 17:09:12 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Update content

---
 app/templates/views/get-started | 46 ++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 23 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/templates/views/get-started b/app/templates/views/get-started
index 4772fdf56..c842f5589 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/get-started
+++ b/app/templates/views/get-started
@@ -26,55 +26,55 @@
         </ul>
         <p>Notify is not currently available to charities.</p>
     </details>
-    <p>To find out whether Notify meets your needs, read about our:
-    <ul class="list list-bullet">
-      <li><a href="{{ url_for('main.features') }}">features</a></li>
-      <li><a href="{{ url_for('main.roadmap') }}">roadmap</a></li>
-    </ul>
-    <p>You can read about our <a href="{{ url_for('main.features') }}">features</a> and <a href="{{ url_for('main.roadmap') }}">roadmap</a> to find out whether Notify meets your needs.</p>
-    <p>If you plan to integrate with our API, you can share our <a href="{{ url_for('main.documentation') }}">documentation<a> with your developers.</p>
+    
+    <p>Read about our <a href="{{ url_for('main.features') }}">features</a> and <a href="{{ url_for('main.roadmap') }}">roadmap</a> to find out whether Notify meets your needs.</p>
   </li>
     
   <li>
     <h2 class="heading-small">Create an account</h2>
     {% if not current_user.is_authenticated %}
-      <p><a href="{{ url_for('main.register') }}">Create an account</a> for free and set up your first Notify service.</p>
+      <p><a href="{{ url_for('main.register') }}">Create an account</a> for free and set up your first Notify service. When you set up a new service, it will start in <a href="{{ url_for('main.trial-mode') }}">trial mode</a>.</p>
     {% else %}
-      <p>Create an account for free and set up your first Notify service.</p>
+      <p>Create an account for free and set up your first Notify service. When you set up a new service, it will start in <a href="{{ url_for('main.trial-mode') }}">trial mode</a>.</p>
     {% endif %}
-    <p>When you set up a new service, it will start in <a href="{{ url_for('main.trial-mode') }}">trial mode</a>. This will let you send messages to yourself and other members of your team.</p>
   </li>
   
   <li>
-    <h2 class="heading-small">Add message templates</h2>
-    <p>While your service is still in trial mode, add templates with examples of the content you plan to send.</p>
-    <p>GOV.UK has written guidance on:</p>
+    <h2 class="heading-small">Write some messages</h2>
+    <p>Add <a href="">reusable message templates</a> with examples of the content you plan to send.</p>
+    <p>The GOV.UK Service Manual has advice on:</p>
     <ul class="list list-bullet">
-      <li><a href="https://www.gov.uk/service-manual/design/sending-emails-and-text-messages">planning and writing text messages and emails</a></li>
+      <li><a href="https://www.gov.uk/service-manual/design/sending-emails-and-text-messages#how-to-write-emails-and-text-messages">how to write emails and text messages</a></li>
       <li><a href="https://www.gov.uk/service-manual/design/writing-effective-letters">writing effective letters</a></li>
-    </ul>    
-    <p>We recommend testing your messages and changing your settings until everything is working the way you want it to.</p>
+    </ul> 
+    <p>If you’re planning to <a href="">upload your own letters</a>, you do not need to add letter templates.</p>
   </li>
   
   <li>
-    <h2 class="heading-small">Share Notify with your team</h2>
+    <h2 class="heading-small">API integration (optional) </h2>
+    <p>Share our <a href="{{ url_for('main.documentation') }}">documentation</a> with your developers to help them set up an API integration.</p>
+
+    <p>You only need to do this if you're using the API to send messages automatically, rather than signing in to Notify.</p>
+  </li>
+    
+  <li>
+    <h2 class="heading-small">Manage your team members and settings</h2>
     {% if not current_user.is_authenticated %}
-    <p>You can invite colleagues from the <a href="{{ url_for('main.register') }}">team members</a> page.</p>
+    <p>Check that each of your <a href="{{ url_for('') }}">team members</a> has the right <a href="">permissions</a>.</p>
+    <p>Review your <a href="{{ url_for('') }}">settings</a> to make sure you have the right branding and sender information.</p>
     {% else %}
-    <p>You can invite colleagues from the team members page.</p>
+    <p>Check that each of your team members has the right <a href="">permissions</a>.</p>
+    <p>Review your settings to make sure you have the right branding and sender information.</p>
     {% endif %}
-    <p>Notify lets you control which members of your team can see, create, edit and send messages.</p>
-    <p>If you're using our API to automate your messages, share our <a href="{{ url_for('main.documentation') }}">documentation<a> with your developers.</p>
   </li>
   
   <li>
     <h2 class="heading-small">Start sending messages</h2>
     {% if not current_user.is_authenticated %}
-    <p>When you're ready to start sending messages to people outside your team, you can send us a <a href="{{ url_for('main.request-to-go-live') }}">request to go live</a>.</p>
+    <p><a href="{{ url_for('') }}">Request to go live</a> when you're ready to start sending messages to people outside your team.</p>
     {% else %}
     <p>When you're ready to start sending messages to people outside your team, you can send us a request to go live.</p>
     {% endif %}
-    <p>By requesting to go live you’re agreeing to our terms of use, data sharing and financial agreements.</p>
     <p>When we receive your request we’ll get back to you within one working day.</p>
 
 {% endblock %}