From 505c17f5f0c28d2cabaf6f5314f10d621e340298 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: karlchillmaid <karl.chillmaid@digital.cabinet-office.gov.uk>
Date: Thu, 18 Jul 2019 10:34:34 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Update content

---
 .../views/agreement/service-agreement.html        | 15 +++++++--------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/templates/views/agreement/service-agreement.html b/app/templates/views/agreement/service-agreement.html
index ee6ad6f22..51d3d9063 100644
--- a/app/templates/views/agreement/service-agreement.html
+++ b/app/templates/views/agreement/service-agreement.html
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 {% from "components/page-header.html" import page_header %}
 
 {% block service_page_title %}
-  GOV.UK Notify data sharing and financial agreement
+  Accept the data sharing and financial agreement
 {% endblock %}
 
 {% block maincolumn_content %}
@@ -11,25 +11,24 @@
   <div class="column-five-sixths">
 
     {{ page_header(
-      'GOV.UK Notify data sharing and financial agreement',
+      'Accept the data sharing and financial agreement',
       back_link=url_for('main.request_to_go_live', service_id=current_service.id)
     )}}
 
     <p>
-      To use GOV.UK Notify your organisation ({{ current_service.organisation.name }}) must accept the GOV.UK Notify data sharing and financial agreement.
+      Before you can use GOV.UK Notify, you need to accept our data sharing and financial agreement.
     </p>
     <p>
-      This agreement only needs to be accepted once and will then cover all Notify services from
-      {{ current_service.organisation.name }}.
+      This must be done by, or on behalf of, someone with the authority to sign contracts for {{ current_service.organisation.name }}.
     </p>
     <p>
-      It needs to be accepted by, or on behalf of someone who can sign contracts for your organisation.
+      Once accepted, the agreement covers all Notify services from {{ current_service.organisation.name }}.
     </p>
     <p>
-      <a href="{{ url_for('main.service_download_agreement', service_id=current_service.id) }}">Download a copy of the agreement</a>.
+      <a href="{{ url_for('main.service_download_agreement', service_id=current_service.id) }}">Download a copy of the data sharing and financial agreement</a>.
     </p>
     <p>
-      The agreement contains commercially sensitive information, so don’t share it more widely than you need to.
+      The agreement is confidential and should not be shared outside your organisation.
     </p>
     <a href="{{ url_for('main.service_accept_agreement', service_id=current_service.id) }}" class="button">Continue</a>