From 2707e5192e6ba788ec4f532ca8e4c66e07372c84 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: karlchillmaid <karl.chillmaid@digital.cabinet-office.gov.uk>
Date: Thu, 15 Aug 2019 15:13:39 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Amend content for clarity

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 app/templates/views/roadmap.html | 17 +++++++++--------
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diff --git a/app/templates/views/roadmap.html b/app/templates/views/roadmap.html
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@@ -10,37 +10,38 @@
   <h1 class="heading-large">Roadmap</h1>
 
   <p>The GOV.UK Notify roadmap shows the things we’re working on and when we hope to have them ready for you to use.</p>
-  <p>Notify is in public beta. This means it’s fully operational and supported, but we’re regularly adding new features. The roadmap is a guide to what we have planned, but some things might change.</p>
+  <p>Notify is in public beta. This means it’s fully operational and supported, but we’re still adding new features. The roadmap is a guide to what we have planned, but some things might change.</p>
   <p>You can <a href="{{url_for('.feedback', ticket_type='ask-question-give-feedback')}}">contact us</a> if you have any questions about the roadmap or suggestions for new features.</p>
 
   <h2 class="heading-medium">July to September 2019</h2>
   
   <ul class="list list-bullet">
-    <li>Upload and send single letters from your own files</li>
+    <li>Upload your own letters instead of using Notify templates</li>
     <li>Get automated updates about returned and undelivered letters</li>
   </ul>
 
   <h2 class="heading-medium">October to December 2019</h2>
   
   <ul class="list list-bullet">
-    <li>Send international letters</li>
-    <li>Upload and send bulk letters from a mail merge</li>
+    <li>Send letters internationally</li>
+    <li>Upload a mail merge of letters instead of using Notify templates</li>
   </ul>
 
   <h2 class="heading-medium">January to March 2020</h2>
   
   <ul class="list list-bullet">
-    <li>Bilingual letter templates</li>
-    <li>Save your work in progress as a draft template</li>
+    <li>Bilingual letter templates for services that need to provide information in 2 languages</li>
+    <li>Save draft templates</li>
   </ul>
 
   <h2 class="heading-medium">April 2020 onwards</h2>
 
   <ul class="list list-bullet">
+    
     <li>Other ways to pay for Notify</li>
     <li>Send emails from NHS and Parliament email addresses</li>
-    <li>Link shortening service for friendly URLs</li>
-    <li>Two-factor authentication for files sent by email</li>
+    <li>Link shortening service</li>
+    <li>Two-factor authentication for accessing files sent by email</li>
     <li>Specify an expiry period for undeliverable text messages</li>
     <li>Distribute the delivery of a batch of messages over several hours</li>
   </ul>