From 437e4f52bd57282b5aa73a8209780b32e2c1b841 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 12:47:23 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 01/14] Amend intro and sign-in text --- app/templates/signedout.html | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/templates/signedout.html b/app/templates/signedout.html index d2beafabe..c1e6b26a0 100644 --- a/app/templates/signedout.html +++ b/app/templates/signedout.html @@ -12,13 +12,13 @@ GOV.UK Notify | Get started

Use GOV.UK Notify to send notifications by text message, email and letter.

We're making it easy to keep your users informed.

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If you work for a central UK Government department or agency you can set up a test account now.

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If you work for a UK government department or agency you can set up a test account now.

Set up an account -

Sign in

+

If you've used GOV.UK Notify before, sign in to your account

From 8ade276c3c2a0e6ae246c80f719b17f8f570a92a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 12:49:38 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 02/14] Amend intro and sign-in text --- app/templates/signedout.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/app/templates/signedout.html b/app/templates/signedout.html index c1e6b26a0..49d5d6be8 100644 --- a/app/templates/signedout.html +++ b/app/templates/signedout.html @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ GOV.UK Notify | Get started -

If you've used GOV.UK Notify before, sign in to your account

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If you've used GOV.UK Notify before, sign in to your account.

From 7c3ff23ee22fd2f0c83d0ae81f9fdc0aba642199 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 12:51:06 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 03/14] Amend intro text and add password prompt --- app/templates/register.html | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/templates/register.html b/app/templates/register.html index e15bc137e..99c585714 100644 --- a/app/templates/register.html +++ b/app/templates/register.html @@ -12,9 +12,7 @@ GOV.UK Notify | Create an account

If you've used GOV.UK Notify before, sign in to your account.

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You need access to your email account and a mobile phone to register.

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+ {{ form.hidden_tag() }}

@@ -32,6 +30,7 @@ GOV.UK Notify | Create an account

{{ form.password(class="form-control-1-4", autocomplete="off") }}
+ Your password must have at least 10 characters

From 0af88bb99fe2bdb5c8d98ccf9a4de053f9cfc249 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 12:53:25 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 04/14] Amend intro text & delete email/phone prompts --- app/templates/verify.html | 3 --- 1 file changed, 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/templates/verify.html b/app/templates/verify.html index 42235ee56..a6ab5b8f5 100644 --- a/app/templates/verify.html +++ b/app/templates/verify.html @@ -10,18 +10,15 @@ GOV.UK Notify | Confirm email address and mobile number

Activate your account

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You need to prove the contact details you gave us are yours.

We've sent you confirmation codes by email and text message. You need to enter both codes here.


I haven't received an email


I haven't received a text

From b2cae0d1628d6e61094d2d9e859f9b1f6db904a3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 14:46:01 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 05/14] Amend text --- app/templates/add-service.html | 11 ++++++----- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/templates/add-service.html b/app/templates/add-service.html index dd2f3b1a0..0924f35aa 100644 --- a/app/templates/add-service.html +++ b/app/templates/add-service.html @@ -9,6 +9,12 @@ GOV.UK Notify | Set up service

Set up notifications for your service

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Users will see your service name:

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  • at the start of every text message, eg 'Vehicle tax: we received your payment, thank you'
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  • as your email sender name
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@@ -17,11 +23,6 @@ GOV.UK Notify | Set up service For example, 'Vehicle tax' or 'Carer's allowance'

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We'll create your service in test mode

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In test mode you can only send notifications to people in your team.

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When you're ready to go live we'll remove this restriction.

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Continue

From 7836241f488557670b358a0e9365c608aceeb566 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 14:50:23 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 06/14] Amend text --- app/templates/signin.html | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/templates/signin.html b/app/templates/signin.html index b47f53475..c116cd7e5 100644 --- a/app/templates/signin.html +++ b/app/templates/signin.html @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Sign in

Sign in

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If you do not have an account, you can register.

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If you do not have an account, you can register for one.

{{ form.hidden_tag() }} @@ -33,4 +33,4 @@ Sign in
-{% endblock %} \ No newline at end of file +{% endblock %} From 9be1612c0942da1d2ae965fa0bfa171066432b0c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 14:54:40 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 07/14] Amend text --- app/templates/two-factor.html | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/templates/two-factor.html b/app/templates/two-factor.html index 293679b0c..9f23831af 100644 --- a/app/templates/two-factor.html +++ b/app/templates/two-factor.html @@ -10,11 +10,10 @@ GOV.UK Notify | Text verification

Text verification

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We've sent you a text message containing a verification code.

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We've sent you a text message with a verification code.

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From dc313a601cb81dac3f8d677565e10a9fc0ca2922 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 14:56:23 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 08/14] Amend text --- app/templates/verification-not-received.html | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/templates/verification-not-received.html b/app/templates/verification-not-received.html index b21b16850..c151f7b21 100644 --- a/app/templates/verification-not-received.html +++ b/app/templates/verification-not-received.html @@ -10,15 +10,15 @@ GOV.UK Notify

Resend verification code

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Text messages sometimes take a few minutes to be received.
If you have not received a text message, you can resend.

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Text messages sometimes take a few minutes to arrive, but if you do not receive a text message, you can resend it.

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If you no longer have access to your mobile phone and registered number, get in contact with your service manager to reset your number.

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If you no longer have access to the phone with the number you registered for this service, speak to your service manager to reset the number.

- Resend confirmation code + Resend verification code

-{% endblock %} \ No newline at end of file +{% endblock %} From 3c99eb2d3aa827ac8ffad5740eea11bac4a12822 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 14:57:16 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 09/14] Amend text --- app/templates/verification-not-received.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/app/templates/verification-not-received.html b/app/templates/verification-not-received.html index c151f7b21..de1d9204f 100644 --- a/app/templates/verification-not-received.html +++ b/app/templates/verification-not-received.html @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ GOV.UK Notify

Resend verification code

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Text messages sometimes take a few minutes to arrive, but if you do not receive a text message, you can resend it.

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Text messages sometimes take a few minutes to arrive. If you do not receive the text message, you can resend it.

If you no longer have access to the phone with the number you registered for this service, speak to your service manager to reset the number.

From e8839c3300d8b417036a4ef7411f62773dc61316 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 15:02:00 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 10/14] Amend text --- app/templates/new-password.html | 7 +++++-- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/templates/new-password.html b/app/templates/new-password.html index 0d2c811f7..f64c68eeb 100644 --- a/app/templates/new-password.html +++ b/app/templates/new-password.html @@ -9,10 +9,13 @@ GOV.UK Notify

Create a new password

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You can now create a new password for your account.

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@@ -21,4 +24,4 @@ GOV.UK Notify

-{% endblock %} \ No newline at end of file +{% endblock %} From aadad35d715a1634edac2033591fead19d3f7794 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 15:05:51 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 11/14] Amend text and add password prompt --- app/templates/register-from-invite.html | 5 +++-- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/templates/register-from-invite.html b/app/templates/register-from-invite.html index 73169cc06..c1565d7f9 100644 --- a/app/templates/register-from-invite.html +++ b/app/templates/register-from-invite.html @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ GOV.UK Notify | Create a user account

If you've used GOV.UK Notify before, sign in to your account.

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@@ -21,8 +21,9 @@ GOV.UK Notify | Create a user account

- + + Your password must have at least 10 characters

From 30f55321b28e4e3923a27bf02db90c5fe19c07b9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 15:07:21 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 12/14] Amend text --- app/templates/verify-mobile.html | 6 ++---- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/templates/verify-mobile.html b/app/templates/verify-mobile.html index 10a82b3d5..ae66bbecf 100644 --- a/app/templates/verify-mobile.html +++ b/app/templates/verify-mobile.html @@ -10,12 +10,10 @@ GOV.UK Notify | Confirm mobile number

Confirm your mobile number

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You need to prove the contact details you gave us are yours.

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We've sent you an email and a text message containing confirmation codes.

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We've sent you a confirmation code by text message.

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From 619df26690c5c24137767b641be785343ec136e0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 15:08:41 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 13/14] Amend text --- app/templates/text-not-received-2.html | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/templates/text-not-received-2.html b/app/templates/text-not-received-2.html index c5ffb8e8e..ea6e87eca 100644 --- a/app/templates/text-not-received-2.html +++ b/app/templates/text-not-received-2.html @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ GOV.UK Notify

Check your mobile number

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Check your mobile phone number is correct and resend a confirmation code.

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Check your mobile phone number is correct and then resend the confirmation code.

@@ -26,4 +26,4 @@ GOV.UK Notify

-{% endblock %} \ No newline at end of file +{% endblock %} From e9c9b8c271336724180ee5eecf665b6029ad9e98 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lorena Sutherland Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 15:12:48 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 14/14] Amend text --- app/templates/signin.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/app/templates/signin.html b/app/templates/signin.html index c116cd7e5..0c3d34531 100644 --- a/app/templates/signin.html +++ b/app/templates/signin.html @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Sign in

Sign in

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If you do not have an account, you can register for one.

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If you do not have an account, you can register for one now.

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